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posted by [personal profile] sigelphoenix at 10:35pm on 29/05/2008 under ,
Title: Becoming Queen
Characters: Sae, Reika, Gunnar, Khag, Mizuki, Otonashi
Warmakers Adventure: 26
Word Count: ~1600
Summary: Sae conquered Hell. Now she finds out what that means.
Notes: Thanks to [insanejournal.com profile] shadawyn, beta reader extraordinaire.

When Sae asks for the Ruby Rod of Asmodeus, she isn't asking for it the same way as Nariko, who takes the weapon of the Lord of Nessus in order to purge it of its evil power. She isn't asking for it the same way Rex would ask - or, to be accurate, would not ask - for a cool new toy. She's asking for a trophy from her kill.

She could also take an ear, perhaps, or even Asmodeus' head. But that's messy, and besides, she isn't sure she'd want an actual piece of the Lord of the Ninth Layer of Hell. The rod, at least, has been purified by Nariko.

But when the young goddess hands over the rod, and Sae reaches for it, she feels a preternatural understanding that she is getting much more than a souvenir. She doesn't comprehend that feeling until her fingers close upon it - or maybe the comprehension is what makes them close - and she realizes that taking Asmodeus' Ruby Rod means taking Asmodeus' kingdom.

She has taken Hell. As Gaia Earth guided her, as Gaia M-Tor instructed her, as she herself vowed to Asmodeus.

***

The longer she holds the Ruby Rod of Asmodeus, the more Sae understands. The Ninth Layer of Hell is hers to rule. Forever. And the artifact has already started taking measures upon her body to ensure that "forever" is an option.

She cries, just once. As shock begins to recede and the full significance of her fate registers in her mind, the weight of it presses upon her and makes her chest feel too small for breath. This is what I defied Asmodeus for? she thinks. Just to be trapped by him in the end? Her hand tightens on Reika's - she was so numb she didn't notice her sister taking her hand - and Sae hugs her twin as tears flow silently down her face.

Reika holds onto her as she cries, until the weight crushes less and the burden begins to recede.

Sae will always have Reika. She knows this, because of Reika's words and their blood. She has her comrades, here in the Cathedral and outside, fighting through the army of remaining devils to reach her. Reika murmurs in her ear the message from the Celestials, that the Mother of All Dragons has been defeated, and she knows she has Gunnar too.

The throne of Asmodeus may be lonely, but Sae is not alone.

***

When Sae and her teammates leave the Cathedral to retrieve the troops she and Reika left behind, they find that they don't have far to go. The army has advanced deeper into Hell than when she left them, and the obvious reason for their progress is Gunnar, brandishing Balmung and covered in dragon blood, leading the charge.

She's pretty sure that's a giant heart tied to his back.

Sae doesn't even bother joining in the battle, but runs straight through the chaos and leaps to hug him, bloody heart and all. She kisses him soundly, heedless of the blood from the Mother of All Dragons on his body, even as the places where it mixes with Asmodeus' blood start to smoke and hiss.

Eventually Sae disengages and draws her scimitars to start in on the devils that still surround them. Between Gunnar and Earth's army, and the other Guardians joined by the newly released Celestials, the remaining devils don't stand a chance.

The sight of Gunnar's smiling face has banished the vestiges of her sadness, and she informs him of her success with pride: "I'm the Queen of Hell." She even smiles a little at the absurdity and wonder of it.

Gunnar blinks, caught in mid-swing as his blade tears through a devil. He's used one of his special techniques, which takes the power from his attack and pours it into Sae's body, healing her wounds. It's a holy technique from Saint Joan of Arc. "Uh ... did that work?" he asks.

"Yes."

"Good," he says with relief. "Then congratulations."

***

After the fighting ends and they lay down their arms, Sae finds Khag to make sure that he is safe, and thanks him for his leadership in the battle. She fills him in on what happened in the Cathedral, describing the defeat of Asmodeus and all its repercussions. For her, the war in Hell is not over; in one way or another, she will be fighting it for the rest of her unending life.

And for that war, she will need her army. She has one question for her lieutenant: "Will you stay with me?"

Khag goes down on one knee - he's still taller than her - and bows his head. "Of course I will, Your Majesty."

His words make her inexplicably sad. "Khag, don't -" she begins, reaching out to pull him up.

He catches her hands, remaining kneeling but looking her in the eye. "And you will allow me to make this choice for my friend."

Her protest dies on her lips, and she bows her head in return. "Thank you."

***

Telling her parents is hard, because it means telling them that she won't be able to go home with them. All this time, they - and Sae herself - had been holding to the thought that, once the Guardians succeeded, their year-long separation would end and the twins could go back to living with their parents.

"Mom, Dad," she begins, taking her parents to a quiet area away from the party noise. "Since I killed Asmodeus ..."

"You're going to live here now," her mother finishes her sentence.

Sae blinks.

"You became Queen, so now you're tied to your Kingdom," Mizuki says matter-of-factly, sipping her tea. But when she lowers her cup, she looks at her daughter with a wistful gaze. "I wish your duty didn't take you so far from us, though."

"Cheer up, girls!" Otonashi says, hugging his wife with one arm and his daughters with the other. "Forever isn't really forever, and rules are broken all the time. We'll come up with something, so just enjoy the party."

The twins look askance at their father. "You've been acting really weird, Daddy," Reika says. "What happened during -"

She is interrupted when Otonashi accosts a group of battle nuns and space marines, who are bearing tubs of ice cream to the banquet tables. "Over here!" he calls, pulling them over before they have a chance to say no. "We'll eat directly from the tubs. We just need spoons! Come on, dig in."

Mizuki raises an eyebrow at her husband, but just says, "Your father is right, girls. This is a time to celebrate. Eat up."

***

Reika, of course, designs Sae a new outfit.

Sae protests at first that she doesn't need one, and it would just get in the way during battle. But Reika presses the red and black bodysuit into her arms, telling her to just try it on, and Sae has to admit that it's not that bad. The Khar ceramic armor is incorporated into the ensemble to provide protection, and whatever material her sister used hugs the body while still letting her skin breathe. The stark colors of the design make her look a fierce sort of majestic.

"Now you look like a Queen," Reika proclaims, as Sae turns this way and that in front of a mirror.

"What if I don't want to look like a Queen?" she mutters.

"I know you don't like drawing attention to yourself like this, oneesan. But you're still conquering this realm - you have to make everyone believe that you're the ruler," Reika advises. "If you're going to rule Hell, then you need to look, and act, the part."

"It's not like I have a choice," Sae says petulantly.

Reika sighs. "I know, oneesan. I wish you did."

Sae shakes her head. "Sorry. You're helping. And ... well, maybe I would have chosen this, even if I knew what would happen. I want to keep the devils in check, and make sure Hell never invades our plane again. Besides, fighting devils is what I'm good at - not any of the things that need to be taken care of on Earth, like working with governments and designing new cities. What would I do up there anyway?"

She doesn't meet Reika's eyes when she asks the question, peering instead at a random detail of her costume. Sae lets out a breath as Reika just nods, letting the lie go unremarked between them.

Neither of them mentions the plans Sae once shared with her, like going back to school or living with their parents again like a normal girl. Or even working for their parents' organization, like a less normal but still human girl. Reika had plans like that too, once, and if they have to give them up, at least they're doing it together.

"So," Sae says loudly, her voice banishing brooding silence. "What's this for?" She fiddles with a circular sheath attached to her back.

"Oh, that." Reika's face brightens instantly. "That's for your Mega-Rod."

"My what?"

"I read it in a comic book. I thought you might like that name better than 'Ruby Rod of Asmodeus.'"

Sae gives her sister an exasperated look. "You're enjoying this too much," she grumbles, only to be met with Reika's cheeky grin.
Mood:: 'creative' creative
There are 22 comments on this entry. (Reply.)
 
posted by [identity profile] ratzeo.insanejournal.com at 05:51am on 30/05/2008
I busted up at the holy energy conversation.
 
posted by [identity profile] sigelphoenix.insanejournal.com at 03:57pm on 30/05/2008
What are you talking about? It was a very important conversation. Totally Serious Business.
 
posted by [identity profile] shadawyn.insanejournal.com at 02:29pm on 30/05/2008
The twins are an unstoppable, unexpected duo for the "peaceful" reign of Earth and Hell :D

It's sorta funny how things didn't turn out like either of them expected. I think it might be harder for the twins if Earth hadn't gone through so many changes. Even if Sae hadn't become Queen of Hell, and Reika hadn't gone Celestial, the world is too broken for them to go back to the normal lives they fantasized about, anyway.

Instead, they get to do big important things on Hell and Earth together. :D It's all very exciting once the shock wears away.
 
posted by [identity profile] sigelphoenix.insanejournal.com at 04:28pm on 30/05/2008
Ultimately, this is pretty close to what Sae wants. Even the "normal" life she wanted would have involved something like the family business, because she lacks the patience and skills for normal 16 year-old lives. And even then, a job like Otonashi's probably involves more espionage and infiltration than combat, which isn't Sae's main focus.

You know, I remember thinking, back when we had the conversation about the twins' post-war lives, that Sae's work-for-parents-and-visit-M-Tor plans were kind of nebulous and lacked some strong, central purpose. Now she has that purpose, and provides a complement to her sister's work. It's almost like some higher power put this all in place ... ;D
 
posted by [identity profile] shadawyn.insanejournal.com at 05:42pm on 30/05/2008
Bless Nariko! We weren't even supposed to fight Asmodeus, let alone have Sae actually take Hell.

But, you know. Just fighting the Emperor wasn't good enough conquering for the twins ;)

 
posted by [identity profile] sigelphoenix.insanejournal.com at 05:53pm on 30/05/2008
Really? Was Nariko the one intended to rule Hell?

I just figured, you know, one pit fiend wouldn't be enough for the twins and their army. Of course, Mike might have had plans for the devil army to harry us, except we over-planned and had every contingency avaiable. :P
 
posted by [identity profile] shadawyn.insanejournal.com at 06:01pm on 30/05/2008
No one was intended to rule Hell. Just kill Asmodeus, and maybe not even that. I THINK, in hindsight, we were supposed to start blowing trumpets instead of going after him ourselves. Hahaha. We can ask him on Wednesday or in email for specifics on how he thought what was gonna play out.

Yay overplanning! Made the pit fiend battle less scary, but... well, I found the Asmodeus battle pretty intense, myself.

 
posted by [identity profile] sigelphoenix.insanejournal.com at 06:09pm on 30/05/2008
Haha, whoops. XD

Mike made it all seem so smooth, though! Maybe he wasn't that surprised, given that he allowed two of the most neurotic players time to plan a combined strategy. :P

What I liked best about the Asmodeus battle is that, even though it was over quickly, several instants within those two rounds were really make-or-break moments. So much excitement!
 
posted by [identity profile] shadawyn.insanejournal.com at 06:17pm on 30/05/2008
several instants within those two rounds were really make-or-break moments

Exactly. People are like "but it was only two rounds! That was easy." and I'm like "WE SPENT 3 DETERMINATION POINTS IN THOSE TWO ROUNDS! It was not 'easy'!"
 
posted by [identity profile] jfrog78.insanejournal.com at 06:00pm on 30/05/2008
So wouldn't be a ruler in hell eventually make you a deity of some sort?
 
posted by [identity profile] sigelphoenix.insanejournal.com at 06:03pm on 30/05/2008
You know, I have no idea. Mike has told me that Sae (and Khag, for as long as he serves her) will be immortal. I don't think she develops any divine powers though.
 
posted by [identity profile] shadawyn.insanejournal.com at 06:18pm on 30/05/2008
Plz be handing some of that immortality to Reika.

I don't think Subaru wants it, though. It'd make him angsty.
 
posted by [identity profile] sigelphoenix.insanejournal.com at 06:23pm on 30/05/2008
Hey, if Sae gets her way, she's going to be immortalizing her loved ones. Although I guess it's more accurate to say they'd be ageless, because as I understand it she can still be killed.

But Mike said that you guys had a conversation about the Guardians and immortality, so I'm keeping my hands off the subject for now.

Poor Subaru. He'd be sad because it'd keep him away from Jun. D;
 
posted by [identity profile] shadawyn.insanejournal.com at 06:28pm on 30/05/2008
Reika actually wouldn't be too interested in immortality if Sae wasn't going to be immortal. But she doesn't want her twin to be lonely.

Plus, if she's mortal, how would she keep long-lived Ichiro from taking over the universe?
 
posted by [identity profile] sigelphoenix.insanejournal.com at 06:38pm on 30/05/2008
Yeah, Sae wasn't keen on living forever. But if that's the case she'd be happy for her sister's company.

Oh, right, and then there's our megalomaniac teammate. :P
 
posted by [identity profile] amheriksha.insanejournal.com at 04:33pm on 30/05/2008
All hail Queen Sae, ruler of Hell! :D

*wants to know if she going to make Gunnar consort of Hell, Catholicism and all. ^_~*
 
posted by [identity profile] sigelphoenix.insanejournal.com at 04:42pm on 30/05/2008
Possibly! I'm still figuring out what's going to happen with them, based on conversations with [insanejournal.com profile] ratzeo and any input/restrictions from the GM. But I like the idea of Gunnar being both Pope and Hell Consort. XD
 
posted by [identity profile] shadawyn.insanejournal.com at 05:43pm on 30/05/2008
Hrm. If Gunnar moves into the Cathedral of Shards, maybe Reika will decide its time for her to leave. Fifth wheel and all ;)
 
posted by [identity profile] sigelphoenix.insanejournal.com at 05:54pm on 30/05/2008
D:

No leaving allowed! Says the Queen! XD
 
posted by [identity profile] jack_grimm.insanejournal.com at 07:39pm on 30/05/2008
Ichiro would approach Sae after a few days. Checking up on her and how she is doing.

And, of course, presenting her with options.

"They way I see it, you can do three things. One, abdicate the throne which wuld serve he perpouse of causing the factions of this layer of hell and others (perhaps the celestials) to begin in-fighting. Two, and obviously I would suggest this one so I figured I'd get it over with, you could give it to me. And the Third option, and this is the one I love the most, You take the rod and split it between you and your sister. There is a certain romanticism to it. The Twin Queens of Hell. And the Leader and the Conquerer. It fits your Archtypes, ultimately would lead to greater freedom, and would allow you both to support each other and maintain balance, and the Higher Planes would sure love to have a representative down here. It would still allow Rieka to continue her work on Earth as well. Hell is to serve a function, as all things in the Multiverse do. It, truely, seems the best option if she is going to be down here any way. You can both bear the burden in practice as well an spirit. But again, you could always give it to me. If you choose to stay, I will always offer my services to you as advisor and ambassador to the other layers."

He presents the "give it to me option", truely, as a way out for Sae. Of course he would love it, but he doesn't have that creepy sort of power-mongering passion in his eyes that he otherwise would.

Sorry I couldn't flesh this out more, little time, but Mike and I were talking and I thought splitting the Rod, the Power, and the Authority would have a certain completeness quality to it with the concept of the twins and all.
 
posted by [identity profile] warmaker.insanejournal.com at 11:35pm on 01/06/2008
Sae's exchange with Khag brought me really close to tears. This whole fic is beautiful in its melancholy way.

"Mega-Rod..."

Geez Reika...
 
posted by [identity profile] sigelphoenix.insanejournal.com at 01:01am on 02/06/2008
Thank you! I think Khag and Sae can have a really interesting relationship. While, as you said, Khag is loyal and obedient, he is also a strong-willed leader in his own right, and has a lot to teach her. He'll be very valuable as her second-in-command, by being a tactical leader but also helping keep Sae grounded (along with Reika).

The Mega-Rod is my entirely my fault, but I couldn't justify Sae having the pop culture knowledge. So it becomes Reika's bad idea. ;D

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