[Warmakers] When the World Stops Turning : comments [sigelphoenix]

EEEEE. I like the direction you took with this. And also your descriptions of Sae fighting. As a player, I don't really understand what Sae can do, so it's hard for me to come up with anymore more than "and then Sae hit it a lot." Reika is probably even more at a disadvantage ;)

I also really like the sudden opposite directions that the twins went at the end. Reika became more solitary, and Sae become more of a team player ;)

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Also, I like your background music ;)

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I thought you might. ;) It really helped, actually - I wasn't feeling the original energy of the fic when I sat down to polish it this morning, and then I remembered that song and just played the YouTube video on repeat. Interspersed with "The Howling," "Stand My Ground," and even one playthrough of "The Burning." 8D

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Hee hee. I'm glad all the music I pimped at you had some use :D

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Yay! I'm glad you liked it. I was happy to focus on the combat details because I like to dork over my character's melee abilities. Also, I'm weak at writing action scenes, so being able to draw upon the technical rules of D&D combat helps by giving me a framework.

Sae always wanted friends; she was just afraid to put herself out there and make them. Although she will still end up being more private and with fewer friends than Reika when Reika eventually(?) becomes social again.

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